[plug] Please proofread this now if you can (PLUG, SLPWA, LCA)

[Bret Busby]

On Thu, 12 Sep 2002, Patrick Tehvand wrote:

> Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2002 14:16:00 +0800
> From: Patrick Tehvand <patrick at perthix.net>
> Reply-To: plug at plug.linux.org.au
> To: plug at plug.linux.org.au
> Subject: Re: [plug] Please proofread this now if you can (PLUG, SLPWA, LCA)
> Resent-Date: Thu, 12 Sep 2002 14:16:46 +0800 (WST)
> Resent-From: plug at plug.linux.org.au
> 
> On Thu, 12 Sep 2002 14:09, Leon Brooks wrote:
> 
> Linux: World Domination here we come
> 

There should be a punctuation symbol after the word "Domination"; either 
a comma or a hyphen (eg, "Domination, here we come", or, "Domination - 
here we come"), to make it grammatically correct.

> Linux is a POSIX-standard Unix-like operating system which started life in 
> 1992 as a rewrite by a Finnish student named Linus (pronounced Lee-nuss) 
> Torvalds of an academic version of Unix called Minix. He published his work 
> on the university's FTP server, told some friends about it, and before he 
> could turn around had fixes for and extensions to it pouring into his 
> mailbox.
>